DESPEARTELY SEEKING ADVICE IMMEDIATE HELP IS APPRETIATED

[muqeem ahmed]

HELLO EVERYONE,
I AM IN DESPERATE NEED OF ADVICE FOR MY STUDENT APPEAL LASTED WITH HOMEOFFICE FROM SETEMBER 2008 AFTER CONSIDERATION OF MY APPEAL AND ASKING ME QUERY OF MY EDUCATION TERM DATES FOR THE UNIVERSITY ACADEMIC YEAR 2008-09 WHICH WE DEALTWITH IN ONE WEAKOF TIME BY SENDING THEM FULL PAPER WORK THROUGH UNIVERSITY ADMINISTRATION AND MY SOLICITOR THROUGH PROPER CHANNELL REQUESTING THEM TO ENDROSE STUDENT VISA ON MY PASSPORT LYING WITH THEM FROM JANUARY 2008 TILL DATE ALTHOUGH MY COURSE IS FINSHED BY THIS TIME AND MY CONNOVOCATION IS DUE ON 4 TH DECEMBER 2009 AND FOR WHICH IAM ELGIBLE TO APPLY FOR POSTSTUDY VISA WITH THEM ON MY MASTERS BUT TILL DATE IAM YET TO RECEIVE ANY COMMUNICATION WITH THEM THEIR IS SIMPLY NO REPLY FROM THEIR SIDE ALTHOUGH MY SOLICITOR IS EVERY KNOW AND THEN SENDING THEM IN WRITTEN ON MY REQUEST REGARDING MY APLLICATION BUT THEIR IS NO ANSWER FROM THEIR SIDE WHEN EVER I CALL THEM THE TELEPHONE OFFICERS ARE NOT HLPFULL ALLL THEY SAY IS YOU HAVE TO WAIT WE DO NOT KNOW ABOUT ANY TIME LIMIT ON OUTSTANDING APPEALS THE SENIOR CASE WORKER CAROLE WARNESWHO IS DESIGNATED FOR MY CASE DIDNT EVEN BOTHERED TO REPLY FOR ONCE TO LET US KNOW WHAT IS HAPPENING BEHIND THE SCENES TO MY PROBLEMS MY PASSPORT IS EXPIRED LYING WITH THEM ON 4TH FEBRUARY 2009 WHICH I AHAVE NOTIFIED THEM BUT YET AGAIN NO RESPONSE FROM HOMKE OFFICE SO IN THESE DESPERATE TIMES WHEN I NEED MY STUDENTD VISA ENDROSED TO APPPLY FOR MY POST STUDY WORK I AM YET TO RECIVE ANY WORD FROM THEM AND MY SOLICITOR ALSO COMPLAINED IT TO THE COMPLAINTS DEPARTMENT BUT NO RESULTS YET WE GOT FEWR OPTIONS HERE I CAN REQUEST FOR AN MEMBER OF PARLIAMENT REVIEW OR WITHDRAW MY APPLICATION AND ASK THEM TO HANDOVER MY PASSPORT SO ANYONE THERE WHO CAN HELP ME PLEASE REPLY ME AS SOON AS POSSIBLE YOUR HELP IS DEARLY AND GREATLY APPRETIATED

[vinny]

HELLO EVERYONE,
I AM IN DESPERATE NEED OF ADVICE FOR MY STUDENT APPEAL LASTED WITH HOMEOFFICE FROM SETEMBER 2008 AFTER CONSIDERATION OF MY APPEAL AND ASKING ME QUERY OF MY EDUCATION TERM DATES FOR THE UNIVERSITY ACADEMIC YEAR 2008-09 WHICH WE DEALTWITH IN ONE WEAKOF TIME BY SENDING THEM FULL PAPER WORK THROUGH UNIVERSITY ADMINISTRATION AND MY SOLICITOR THROUGH PROPER CHANNELL REQUESTING THEM TO ENDROSE STUDENT VISA ON MY PASSPORT LYING WITH THEM FROM JANUARY 2008 TILL DATE ALTHOUGH MY COURSE IS FINSHED BY THIS TIME AND MY CONNOVOCATION IS DUE ON 4 TH DECEMBER 2009 AND FOR WHICH IAM ELGIBLE TO APPLY FOR POSTSTUDY VISA WITH THEM ON MY MASTERS BUT TILL DATE IAM YET TO RECEIVE ANY COMMUNICATION WITH THEM THEIR IS SIMPLY NO REPLY FROM THEIR SIDE ALTHOUGH MY SOLICITOR IS EVERY KNOW AND THEN SENDING THEM IN WRITTEN ON MY REQUEST REGARDING MY APLLICATION BUT THEIR IS NO ANSWER FROM THEIR SIDE WHEN EVER I CALL THEM THE TELEPHONE OFFICERS ARE NOT HLPFULL ALLL THEY SAY IS YOU HAVE TO WAIT WE DO NOT KNOW ABOUT ANY TIME LIMIT ON OUTSTANDING APPEALS THE SENIOR CASE WORKER CAROLE WARNESWHO IS DESIGNATED FOR MY CASE DIDNT EVEN BOTHERED TO REPLY FOR ONCE TO LET US KNOW WHAT IS HAPPENING BEHIND THE SCENES TO MY PROBLEMS MY PASSPORT IS EXPIRED LYING WITH THEM ON 4TH FEBRUARY 2009 WHICH I AHAVE NOTIFIED THEM BUT YET AGAIN NO RESPONSE FROM HOMKE OFFICE SO IN THESE DESPERATE TIMES WHEN I NEED MY STUDENTD VISA ENDROSED TO APPPLY FOR MY POST STUDY WORK I AM YET TO RECIVE ANY WORD FROM THEM AND MY SOLICITOR ALSO COMPLAINED IT TO THE COMPLAINTS DEPARTMENT BUT NO RESULTS YET WE GOT FEWR OPTIONS HERE I CAN REQUEST FOR AN MEMBER OF PARLIAMENT REVIEW OR WITHDRAW MY APPLICATION AND ASK THEM TO HANDOVER MY PASSPORT SO ANYONE THERE WHO CAN HELP ME PLEASE REPLY ME AS SOON AS POSSIBLE YOUR HELP IS DEARLY AND GREATLY APPRETIATED

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